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18歲前嘗禁果 不孕機率增10倍 蘋果日報 - 2008年 06月26日

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未成年結婚 心理疾病風險高 路透(中央社) – 2011年8月31日星期三下午1:30

No matter what a motivation is to drive a teenager into marriage, having baby accidentally or simply because they want to settle down with his or her Mr. or Mr. Right, inevitably, the chances of having sex after getting married is high. Now, I want to talk about the issue with some medication-supported evidence. The report shows that “an underage woman who has sex experiences too early, the chances that she will get caners such cervical cancer increase, 2.5 times higher than do adult women.”(Apple) In addition, “the probability of too-early sex causing barren is 10 times higher than those who have sex later and do not infected by virus.”(Apple) Maybe it can explain the reason why the girl, in my annotation 1, who are eager to get pregnant and even take fertility drugs, keeps failing to have one however hard she tries. She has sex at 12.
Maybe they really fall in love with each other so madly and they can love the other whole their lives; however, without a healthy body, it is more difficult for them. We cannot focus on the feelings at a moment; instead we should think further and see with a point of view in the long term. After all, marriage is not that easy. After going into it, a life is not simply a person’s own. It relates to his or her companion and their children. They need to take responsibility. There is no excuse to avoid and to evade any trouble. Now that you are married, you are an adult. In spite of the fact that actually you are just a teenager. If one of you gets ill, the other one needs to take care of you. It is not an easy task at all. It is a torture not only to a patient herself but to her husband and family since it is a tough and long process. If a man really makes his wife get cervical cancer due to his impulse of sex, he needs to pay a lot to make up the mistake he made when he was too young.
In psychological aspect,” comparing baby brides and female who gets married after 18, the former one is more likely to face psychological disease.”(Reuter) Young wife need to deal with many household affairs which are burdens to such young people. When she sees her friends, dressed up gorgeously, go shopping and have fun all the time with a carefree mind, she may feel sad and unfair because she could enjoy her life as her friends do if she did not get married so early. She may think why she cannot do and buy whatever she wants at will; instead need to worry about money and haggle over every ounce. Gradually, young wives may suffer from psychological problems.
Before discussing whether teen marriage is proper or not, we should also take healthy and psychological concerns into close consideration. Leave common people’s basis away first, the two objective factors influence if a marriage will be happy and blissing profoundly. If you really love your lover, why can’t you just wait for her a bit longer until her body is mature enough? After all, marriage is a long road that you share most of your life there.

1.I add an annotation which is about underage woman is easier to have psychological problem than woman who gets married later. Through the two pieces of annotations, I can talk about the issue in an objective way.

2.I add quotations.

3.I change some of my words and cross out the first paragraph to prevent my article from looking to subjective.