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18歲前嘗禁果 不孕機率增10倍 蘋果日報 - 2008年 06月26日
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未成年結婚 心理疾病風險高 路透(中央社) – 2011年8月31日星期三下午1:30
No matter what a motivation is to drive a teenager into marriage, having baby accidentally or simply because they want to settle down with his or her Mr. or Mr. Right, inevitably, the chances of having sex after getting married is high. Now, I want to talk about the issue with some medication-supported evidence. The report shows that “an underage woman who has sex experiences too early, the chances that she will get caners such cervical cancer increase, 2.5 times higher than do adult women.”(Apple) In addition, “the probability of too-early sex causing barren is 10 times higher than those who have sex later and do not infected by virus.”(Apple) Maybe it can explain the reason why the girl, in my annotation 1, who are eager to get pregnant and even take fertility drugs, keeps failing to have one however hard she tries. She has sex at 12.
Maybe they really fall in love with each other so madly and they can love the other whole their lives; however, without a healthy body, it is more difficult for them. We cannot focus on the feelings at a moment; instead we should think further and see with a point of view in the long term. After all, marriage is not that easy. After going into it, a life is not simply a person’s own. It relates to his or her companion and their children. They need to take responsibility. There is no excuse to avoid and to evade any trouble. Now that you are married, you are an adult. In spite of the fact that actually you are just a teenager. If one of you gets ill, the other one needs to take care of you. It is not an easy task at all. It is a torture not only to a patient herself but to her husband and family since it is a tough and long process. If a man really makes his wife get cervical cancer due to his impulse of sex, he needs to pay a lot to make up the mistake he made when he was too young.
In psychological aspect,” comparing baby brides and female who gets married after 18, the former one is more likely to face psychological disease.”(Reuter) Young wife need to deal with many household affairs which are burdens to such young people. When she sees her friends, dressed up gorgeously, go shopping and have fun all the time with a carefree mind, she may feel sad and unfair because she could enjoy her life as her friends do if she did not get married so early. She may think why she cannot do and buy whatever she wants at will; instead need to worry about money and haggle over every ounce. Gradually, young wives may suffer from psychological problems.
Before discussing whether teen marriage is proper or not, we should also take healthy and psychological concerns into close consideration. Leave common people’s basis away first, the two objective factors influence if a marriage will be happy and blissing profoundly. If you really love your lover, why can’t you just wait for her a bit longer until her body is mature enough? After all, marriage is a long road that you share most of your life there.
1.I add an annotation which is about underage woman is easier to have psychological problem than woman who gets married later. Through the two pieces of annotations, I can talk about the issue in an objective way.
2.I add quotations.
3.I change some of my words and cross out the first paragraph to prevent my article from looking to subjective.
Wednesday, November 30, 2011
Annotation 4-Teen Mom Killed Her Two-year-old Daughter
Source: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Ijs5XyMTro
2010-08-20公視晚間新聞(涉虐2歲女童致死 未成年媽媽收押)
When it comes to the issue of teen marriage, many people hold opinion against it because they doubt that if teen couples or maybe teen parents have the ability to make enough money to support their own family, and that if their mind is mature enough to complete a home. “In Taitung county, the method of a young mom to discipline her 2-year-old daughter is to grab her kid’s head to hit against the wall. The next day, unfortunately, the poor little girl died.” The mom is just 19 years old. She gave birth to her daughter at the age of 17. Although she is at such a young age, she has already had two marriages and 3 children. Their home’s economic situation has been bad for a long time. Her husband is a worker, and most of his time, he doesn’t live with her and his kid.
The news is just an epitome of many tragedies that usually happen in the corner of our society. People get married so early that they don’t even have economic base to raise the family. Thus, miserable consequences appear. Many employers don’t hire underage people. Even part-time jobs require people need to be at least 18 years old. So it is very hard for underage people to get stable works. Under this kind plight, many of them can only earn very little amount of money, or rely on their parents. Some worse cases choose to rob people. If young couples live in this way over a long period of time, they must feel a lot of pressure and their emotion must be bad and down. Arguments and conflicts, then, take place the love they once had. Relationship between husband and wife will deteriorate and thus end up in divorce.
When children are involved, things will go more complicated. First, parents may be too busy doing odd jobs to teach their kids. They may go astray in the future and form a vicious circulation. Second, parents may vent their stress and anger on them. They mind are not mature enough to handle their emotions. When they cannot control their feelings, domestic violence happens. If things go worse, a young life may be sacrifice for his or her parents’ impulse. Last, if parents end up in divorce, it will influence children a lot, too. Who should raise a kid in the condition that both of them don’t have the ability? Who can pay good attention on a kid he or she needs to make money and take of the home alone at the same time?
Underage couples have many difficult problems to deal with. In general, people are reluctant to give them a chance to have a job on account of their immature thinking, irresponsible behaviors and maybe low education. Without a stable salary, it is extremely hard to maintain a marriage. Delaying the marriageable age can give young people more time to think twice if they are really ready to get married instead of just from an impulse.
2010-08-20公視晚間新聞(涉虐2歲女童致死 未成年媽媽收押)
When it comes to the issue of teen marriage, many people hold opinion against it because they doubt that if teen couples or maybe teen parents have the ability to make enough money to support their own family, and that if their mind is mature enough to complete a home. “In Taitung county, the method of a young mom to discipline her 2-year-old daughter is to grab her kid’s head to hit against the wall. The next day, unfortunately, the poor little girl died.” The mom is just 19 years old. She gave birth to her daughter at the age of 17. Although she is at such a young age, she has already had two marriages and 3 children. Their home’s economic situation has been bad for a long time. Her husband is a worker, and most of his time, he doesn’t live with her and his kid.
The news is just an epitome of many tragedies that usually happen in the corner of our society. People get married so early that they don’t even have economic base to raise the family. Thus, miserable consequences appear. Many employers don’t hire underage people. Even part-time jobs require people need to be at least 18 years old. So it is very hard for underage people to get stable works. Under this kind plight, many of them can only earn very little amount of money, or rely on their parents. Some worse cases choose to rob people. If young couples live in this way over a long period of time, they must feel a lot of pressure and their emotion must be bad and down. Arguments and conflicts, then, take place the love they once had. Relationship between husband and wife will deteriorate and thus end up in divorce.
When children are involved, things will go more complicated. First, parents may be too busy doing odd jobs to teach their kids. They may go astray in the future and form a vicious circulation. Second, parents may vent their stress and anger on them. They mind are not mature enough to handle their emotions. When they cannot control their feelings, domestic violence happens. If things go worse, a young life may be sacrifice for his or her parents’ impulse. Last, if parents end up in divorce, it will influence children a lot, too. Who should raise a kid in the condition that both of them don’t have the ability? Who can pay good attention on a kid he or she needs to make money and take of the home alone at the same time?
Underage couples have many difficult problems to deal with. In general, people are reluctant to give them a chance to have a job on account of their immature thinking, irresponsible behaviors and maybe low education. Without a stable salary, it is extremely hard to maintain a marriage. Delaying the marriageable age can give young people more time to think twice if they are really ready to get married instead of just from an impulse.
Tuesday, November 8, 2011
Annotation3- Too Early Sex Causes the Infecund Rate High
18歲前嘗禁果 不孕機率增10倍
In the past, people discuss if teen marriage is appropriate from a point of view that doubting their ability to cope with the problem they will face after marriage. However, it is hard to judge because situations differ from person to person. Although most of them are immature in many ways, there are must someone who make the decision by thorough thinking and they do well prepared to get married.
No matter what a motivation is to drive a teenager into marriage, having baby accidentally or simply because they want to settle down with his or her Mr. or Mr. Right, they must have sex after getting married. Now, I want to talk about the issue with some science-supported evidence. The report shows that if a woman who has sex experiences too early, underage, the chances that she get caners like cervical cancer increase, 2.5 times higher than do adult women. I addition, you are more likely to be barren than those who have sex later and do not infected by virus. Maybe it can explain the reason why the girl, in my annotation 1, who are eager to get pregnant and even take fertility drugs, keeps failing to have one however hard she tries. She has sex at 12.
On an objective point of view, it seems to be inappropriate to get married too early. Maybe they really fall in love with each other so madly and they can love the other whole their lives; however, without a healthy body, it is more difficult for them. We cannot focus on the feelings at a moment; instead we should think further and see with a point of view in the long term. After all, marriage is not that easy. After going into it, a life is not simply a person’s own. It relates to his or her companion and their children. They need to take responsibility. There is no excuse to avoid and to evade any trouble. Now that you are married, you are an adult. In spite of the fact that actually you are just a teenager. If one of you gets ill, the other needs to take care of the other. It is not an easy task at all. If a man really makes his wife get cervical cancer due to his impulse on of sex, he needs to pay a lot to make up the mistake he made when he was too young.
Before getting a teen marriage and discussing whether teen marriage is proper or not, take healthy concern into close consideration. Once into marriage, things become complicated. No longer something simple like I love you and you love me exists.
Reflection 1
Since I start writing the issue about teen marriage, I have been confused. Although I know the general direction, I have no idea about my thesis, I cannot find my point. Each time when we are asked to hand in a new annotation, I feel very depressed and nervous because it is very hard to find any source in the vague issue without a specific direction.
My previous annotations are all about the reason why teenagers want to get married at such young age. Recently, there is a news that if we should modify women’s marriageable age from 16 to 18 in Taiwan. After knowing it, I start to reflect the hot issue. Should we change the legal age to get married? I see many legislators against the proposal; however, what motivating them to say those words seems that they just want to oppose without any reason. Although I was against teen marriage before, I cannot agree with their points of view. Their emotional and careless statement on supporting teen marriage may make immature teenagers misunderstand the meaning of marriage and thus encourage them to get married.
After having the aforementioned thought I find I can discuss objective factors that whether teen marriage is proper or not. After all, if I keep opposing invariably with my personal opinions instead of giving supportive evidence such as the hygiene, health and so on to view it, I will never hit the point. In addition, the cases I cited before were American. It may be too partial to regard the thing in a general eye.
When making a law, legislators tend to support or oppose it with a lot of political concerns. They are not those who really face the problem. Actually, those who have teen marriage most come from lower social status or their original family have some domestic problem. However, the disadvantaged have few accesses to make the society know what they really want. Without in-depth understanding their situation and make a decision by central-minded thoughts will harm them.
Finally, I decide to narrow down my issue to” is 18 proper to marry? ”, and look for other countries law, knowing why they make such a decision. It may differ from country to country with different reasons. After taking and reflecting their example, I can generalize something that can apply to Taiwan. Besides, I can find some sources that expose the real corner of teen couples, maybe their stories, the difficulties they face generalize and how their attitude toward marriage after getting married. Additionally, take some moral prospective into discussion. Does it can really equalize rights between male and female to lift woman’s marriageable age to 18?
My previous annotations are all about the reason why teenagers want to get married at such young age. Recently, there is a news that if we should modify women’s marriageable age from 16 to 18 in Taiwan. After knowing it, I start to reflect the hot issue. Should we change the legal age to get married? I see many legislators against the proposal; however, what motivating them to say those words seems that they just want to oppose without any reason. Although I was against teen marriage before, I cannot agree with their points of view. Their emotional and careless statement on supporting teen marriage may make immature teenagers misunderstand the meaning of marriage and thus encourage them to get married.
After having the aforementioned thought I find I can discuss objective factors that whether teen marriage is proper or not. After all, if I keep opposing invariably with my personal opinions instead of giving supportive evidence such as the hygiene, health and so on to view it, I will never hit the point. In addition, the cases I cited before were American. It may be too partial to regard the thing in a general eye.
When making a law, legislators tend to support or oppose it with a lot of political concerns. They are not those who really face the problem. Actually, those who have teen marriage most come from lower social status or their original family have some domestic problem. However, the disadvantaged have few accesses to make the society know what they really want. Without in-depth understanding their situation and make a decision by central-minded thoughts will harm them.
Finally, I decide to narrow down my issue to” is 18 proper to marry? ”, and look for other countries law, knowing why they make such a decision. It may differ from country to country with different reasons. After taking and reflecting their example, I can generalize something that can apply to Taiwan. Besides, I can find some sources that expose the real corner of teen couples, maybe their stories, the difficulties they face generalize and how their attitude toward marriage after getting married. Additionally, take some moral prospective into discussion. Does it can really equalize rights between male and female to lift woman’s marriageable age to 18?
Wednesday, November 2, 2011
Annotation2-15 Year Old has had sex OVER 300 Times!!
Source:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KRdJ49ItMnc
In this TV show, the 15-year-old girl has a lot of sex experience which is about 300 times. Her mom even witnessed her sex scene. However, she did not feel guilty at all; instead, she slammed the door in her mom’s face and asked her to leave her alone. The more astonishing thing is that her mom finds that she collects many children’s toys in her closet. At the same time people feeling shocked, it explains why such a young girl is oversexed. Her behaviors are driven by the desire of becoming a mom, having her own child.
It is a lot of women’s plan or dream to have a lovely home and a cute baby. Sounds like the most normal and blithest thing in the world. But when a teenage girl has the kind of notion and put it into practice seriously, it may be something. Although these young girls may say they are mature enough and think those who discourage them from having babies do not know them at all. They are just a group of arrogant old fart, always want to instill their clichéd and out-of-date notion to them.
However, do they really as mature as they think themselves? The girl in the talk show has already had countless sexes without any protection. Does she know how thee consequence may be? Bringing up a child without knowing his dad is not that miserable, but what if she is infected with AIDS or venereal disease and contaminates her own innocent kids? It is very irresponsible behavior. In addition, she does not even know how to be a good daughter, shouting at her mom, and do everything heartbreaking to her how can she assert she will be a good mother.
By the way, I make an assumption that the girl is very childish. As we can see easily that the girl is a white, but her accent is so strange that we have some difficulty to get what she say. The way her mom speaks is just like average white people so maybe she tries to imitate black’s accent. She thinks that talk like a black is very cool, but, in fact, I think it is the silliest thing. It not only makes her sound like a duck but expose her immature thought.
The TV show looks fake; however, real or not, in some degree, it reflects our society problem. Both the rates of teen marriage and teen pregnancy are gradually growing wherever in the USA or other countries. It is true that we cannot compare today’s situation with 50 years ago since the whole condition is totally different. Young man and lady get ripe earlier physically today, but it doesn’t necessarily mean our mind can follow the high-speed change in our body. On the contrary, it may do harm to immature teenagers.
In this TV show, the 15-year-old girl has a lot of sex experience which is about 300 times. Her mom even witnessed her sex scene. However, she did not feel guilty at all; instead, she slammed the door in her mom’s face and asked her to leave her alone. The more astonishing thing is that her mom finds that she collects many children’s toys in her closet. At the same time people feeling shocked, it explains why such a young girl is oversexed. Her behaviors are driven by the desire of becoming a mom, having her own child.
It is a lot of women’s plan or dream to have a lovely home and a cute baby. Sounds like the most normal and blithest thing in the world. But when a teenage girl has the kind of notion and put it into practice seriously, it may be something. Although these young girls may say they are mature enough and think those who discourage them from having babies do not know them at all. They are just a group of arrogant old fart, always want to instill their clichéd and out-of-date notion to them.
However, do they really as mature as they think themselves? The girl in the talk show has already had countless sexes without any protection. Does she know how thee consequence may be? Bringing up a child without knowing his dad is not that miserable, but what if she is infected with AIDS or venereal disease and contaminates her own innocent kids? It is very irresponsible behavior. In addition, she does not even know how to be a good daughter, shouting at her mom, and do everything heartbreaking to her how can she assert she will be a good mother.
By the way, I make an assumption that the girl is very childish. As we can see easily that the girl is a white, but her accent is so strange that we have some difficulty to get what she say. The way her mom speaks is just like average white people so maybe she tries to imitate black’s accent. She thinks that talk like a black is very cool, but, in fact, I think it is the silliest thing. It not only makes her sound like a duck but expose her immature thought.
The TV show looks fake; however, real or not, in some degree, it reflects our society problem. Both the rates of teen marriage and teen pregnancy are gradually growing wherever in the USA or other countries. It is true that we cannot compare today’s situation with 50 years ago since the whole condition is totally different. Young man and lady get ripe earlier physically today, but it doesn’t necessarily mean our mind can follow the high-speed change in our body. On the contrary, it may do harm to immature teenagers.
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